Chan Wei Lik wrote:
Always nice to see another AMG fic.
A few things I want to point out.
First, since he started working at Whirlwind, Keiichi no longer spends
much time at NIT. If he's working on a motor, he's more likely to be
doing it at the shop.
Hm. Is this in one of the newer manga that I can't afford, or one of
the raw Japanese manga that I don't have access to?
Or worse, from the movie, and I'm just failing my 'pay attention' check?
But something about him had changed when he had helped Belldandy stop
the
attack that would have destroyed Yggdrasil.
The attack wasn't aimed at Yggdrasil. It was FROM Yggdrasil. I think
that Keiichi would have used up most of the loaned power to cancel that
attack. But what you are describing isn't raw power so that's ok.
Whoops. Guess I gotta watch the movie again -- I missed that one.
Even the engine before him had a spirit, one that regarded him
fearfully, as he worked on it. But he pretended he couldn't see it, and
did his best to ensure the engine a long, functional life.
Bell would tell him to talk to it. It would perform better that way.
Or he could systematically build it up against every way that it
could break until it was impossible to damage.
It's interesting that the goddesses seem to be taking the 'loss' of
Kami-sama about as hard as losing a server. I hope you show more
reactions in the full story.
Why me? I already explained I couldn't finish this one -- I don't
know enough about A!MG to do it well, and you've just proved that with
this e-mail. :p
Promising. I look forward to seeing the whole story.
So do I. I just wonder who's going to write it. :)