W4 wrote:
The following is a chapter from an improvisational fanficiton posted at
http://indiemadnesse.sandwich.net.
This chapter was written by Thomas Wilde (talespinner@msc.net).
Well, let's take a crack at this one.
Tranquilizer darts, loaded with powerful sedatives and tipped with
Adamantium. Check.
Should adamantium be capitalized? It's just an alloy, right?
Affairs in order. Check.
"Exactly what do we need all this for?" Hale asks, slightly wary.
"You'll see," Carver says, checking his harness.
This is overkill....
The planet Namek has never seen such a colossal match of titans,
and, most likely, will never see anything like it again, because those
titans are going to blow the damn thing up.
Well, maybe it's not overkill.
Without the slightest strain, Sayan666 drives his hands into a
previously unexploited fault line in the crust of the surface of Namek. He
straightens, picking up the peninsula he was just standing on, and clubs
Goku with it. Goku is sent spiraling over the horizon, and while he's not
unconscious, he would give everything he possesses to be somewhere else
right now.
HAH!
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Will Carver and Hale survive their battle with Sayan666? Is there actually
a conspiracy behind the agency that employs Carver? What other contracts
await Carver and Hale in the future? Is Russell completely insane?
Find out more in the next chapter of "Self-Extraction", written by the
Blackened Bastard!
Well, first of all, I generally don't like things that are written
in the present tense, but there's a certain stylism here that works much
better than it likely could in past tense, so good work. Moreover, I
_like_ the style, almost as much as I like the story itself.
"Those Who Hunt SIs". Beautiful.
Excelent job on a well-written piece, and I'm eager to see more. ;)