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----- Original Message -----
From: "Kent Hyam" <krhyam@yahoo.com>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Wednesday, January 23, 2002 20:34
Subject: [FFML] [Ranma][Alt] A Fresh Start (Chapter 5)

     I barely controlled the twitch in my right cheek at the sound

of

Akane's cheerful voice.  Ever since Nabiki had insisted that I stop
using Ranma to taste test Akane's cooking, teaching her had become

a

lot more interesting.

How did Nabiki inforce that insistance?

Since Nabiki negotiated the deal that had Ranma working for Ukyou, she
just threatened to pull him out.
 

     "I'm not so sure," Ranma waffled.  "Maybe that would be moving

{to :
too}

quickly."

     "That wasn't my idea," Ranma stated, wearily rubbing {his :

her}
forehead.

     It isn't much harder to cook for two than for one, so it

wasn't

long before we were sitting down to eat.  Ryouga had offered to

help,

but the one thing he and Akane had in common was they were both

lost in

the kitchen.

In lost in very different ways.

I suspect the overall effect would be very similar 

     "I'm fine.  I just...slipped while I was bathing P-chan.  I'll

be

finished in a few minutes."  There was something odd about her

tone,

but that was probably just the effect of the wood between us.

Now we'll have to wait to see if she noticed P-Chan turning into
Ryouga.  If
she did, will she tell Ukyou?

I'll deal with that next chapter. 

Kent Hyam

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