My, another one hot on the heels of the last one:

...
    *WHRRRROOOAAAAAR!!!* The blastwave parted in a V-shape around
the two Asteroid Senshi. They strained, huffed and puffed as they
did their best to resist the onslaught. Inch by inch, they skidded
backwards, closer and closer to their queen.

    Neherenia shook her head, sighed and pointed her hand at the
eye of the storm.

Nice to see she keeps her calm.

    "I do not know what is worse," Neherenia spat and advanced a
few steps forward, "your foul deeds, your pitiful defense," she
hurled another wave of black energy at the girl, "OR YOUR SEETHING
ARROGANCE!!!"

I vote for arrogance.

    <Is it just me, or is this prism we're using really, REALLY
pathetic, even at second-level super modes?>

It is

    <Not breaking down. The transformation is not toxic to us, but
it does make us vulnerable.>

    <And we just figured that out NOW?!>

    <Yup!>

Heh. Finally she figures it out.

    <Yes, we're screwed. Royally, thoroughly, utterly and
completely.>

I doubt it. It's still way to early for her to die now.

    *BLAAAM!* The focused shot exploded around the girl, burning
away the net and sending her limply spinning downward.

Hmm. Wonder if Nehe's recharging again.

    *CRUUUNCH!!!* Terra went pale. She went limp and released
her grip. Her mouth opened wide in shock as she looked down to see
her leg, from the knee, bent seventy degrees in the wrong direction.

    Neherenia's two golems dove down to assist in the scuffle.

Jare's needed em too. :)

    "I give up!" Terra announced.

    "Akis Akiray!!!"

    *BLAAAAAM!!!*

...

    <Gee, that didn't work.>

Heh.

    <You are near the Gate of Time and have its Guardian very
close. Dispose of the Guardian and use the Gate to warn us of the
assassination attempt. A split second in the past is all that will
be necessary to send the message.>

Hmm. Might work

    <My desires are your desires. Not the other way around.>

    <But... I. Love. Her!>

    <We do not concur.>

And this is where she'll win out, methinks. Terrafying is a bad girl, after
all. :)

    The sixteen-year-old queen's expression softened and she
started to giggle. "Hee-hee-hee-hee!"

Oops. That might get Terra the time she needs.

    "Haa, eh-haah," the pale queen finally gained the upper hand
in her battle to stop laughing. She took several deep breaths and
looked down at the injured princess. In the next instant, her
sense of humor vanished. "So, you thought that such a simple mind
trick as that could save you?"

Actually it probably has.

    <This is the Atomic Starlight Knight, reporting failure.>

I think I remember that chapter. Been a while though.

    Both Asteroid Senshi shot her an evil, pitiless glare. "Die!"

Well, their resolve is firm, you have to admit.

    "Ah, I see you've found a new one, Giles. I am not impressed."

    *SHIIIIIIINNN!* After about four feet of metal were exposed, the
blade kept on coming.

    Neherenia's overconfident smirk shifted into a frown.

Heh

*SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHiiiiiiiiiiiiiinggggggggggggk!*

    The glowing crescent moon on the blond man's forehead decreased
in luminosity, reverting to a solid yellow color.

    "The battle is over," Giles announced, placing the scabbard
on his back. He turned to kneel down by Terra. "The forces of good
triumph again, eh?"

Not this time.

Oh, great, I made up ANOTHER new character.

You make it sound like an accident. :)

Nice work. Interesting resolution to the conflict. Fight worked well enough.
Will read more as I get the chance and let you know.

D.B. Sommer




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