Here goes.  As always, the below is only my opinion, and is not
guarenteed to be either useful or correct.

Hmm... seems I missed a couple chapters of this... had to find time to
sit down and catch up before taking on this chapter.

On Sat, 19 Jan 2002 12:03:29 -0500 "Nidoking"
<Matthew.P.Katinas@Rose-Hulman.Edu> writes:

    Sailor Uranus opened her eyes and shook her head, trying without
success to relieve her pounding headache. She was lying on a flat
surface beneath a sky that was a swirl of colors, none of which she
could identify. She groaned. "I don't remember having anything to 
drink
last night..."

Neptune: That's because you've been out for a week.

    Sailor Jupiter shrank back from the figure before her. "What the
heck is that thing?" she asked. "Is it alive, or is it a machine?"
    Sailor Mercury tapped at the keys of her computer. "I can't 
tell...
the reading says that it's electronic, but it's also alive!"
    "Maybe there's something alive under all of that machinery," 
offered
Jupiter.
    Mercury nodded. "It's wearing computerized armor... but the 
being
underneath is both electronic and living."

I think Mercury would be more than capable of making that determination
by herself... and I would imagine the Mercury Computer would probably be
capable of such as well.

    Then, the darkness grabbed that thread and began to pull on it, 
and
Raye's grip began to slip as the thread slid through her fingers as 
if
it had been greased. 'Somebody, please help me!' she begged as she 
clung
to Planet Power with all of her fading strength. 'Mars... Queen
Serenity... anybody! I can't... hold on... forever...'

Evil cliffhanger... ;)

Apologies for the paucity of comments, but they're all that came to mind
as I skimmed through the chapter while writing this e-mail.

Overall comments...

Well, as I recall, I've been following this story from the beginning and
am still interested, so you've acomplished _something_.   Only quibble I
have is the continual addition of new characters/series to the mix, even
as oneshot "Monsters of the Week"- something I feel distracts from the
"interesting" portion of the fic (that being Ranma/Lina/Ryoko).

But in any case, I'm very much enjoying your work and looking forward to
the next chapter.


           Aaron Nowack
"Never let reality get in the way of a good hypothesis."
http://www.geocities.com/anowack/
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