OK, just to set a couple things straight...  I pretty much misrepresented myself in my last comment regarding this story.  I gave the impression that I was unwilling to make significant changes to the fandoms I'm using - like removing one.  It's not that I WON'T, it's just I don't want to, unless it becomes a last resort; the one thing left to save the story.  I'm sorry if I gave a different impression before.  I'm grateful for the C&C I have received so far, because it's helped me identify some pointless meanderings that take place in the story.  I should have known there was a problem when I wrote Chapter Three and it came out to 18 pages in Word JUST ABOUT JACKIE.  The upshot of all of this is I have a few ideas on how to cut the story shorter without removing any of the crossover elements; when I'm done editing I'll put it up, and if you guys still think it's too much I will concur to those who think Sailor Moon is the odd fandom out and remove them.  I just want to try to save my crossover before I completely write it off, that's all.  I'm sorry if I gave a different impression, especially after the hard work of the C&Cers!


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