Well, well, well...

We have several stories/elements wrapped around each other here, and all of
them are interesting.

1.) A sweet little love story with two protagonists trying to set up a life
together.

2.) A X-Files-esqe 'man searches for truth' story.

3.) Politics, politics, and wheels within wheels. Cool.

4.) An interesting examination of exactly what 'morality' implies.
(Personally, I sympathize more with Lucifer's POV)

5.) Grade A USDA Prime fanservice. Yay. h_h

Very much looking forward to more. Particular points I'm hoping to see
expanded are H&S's personalities/interactions/histories. As is, I have a
vague "Okay, these folks are nice and I -want- to like them, but I'll have
to see more to really get into it" feeling.

Blessed be.

Nathan Baxter
I'm not a very good author, but I like to think I'm getting
better.
"Goodbye and hello, as always."
--Corwin of Amber


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