James M. Zema wrote:
Going to try and C&C while I read, hopefully I'll actually get some done
then rather than filing it into a folder where it sits.
Happy day!
"Ah... no," Washuu managed. "If he's integrated them, then they won't
be dangerous to him, only... whoever happens to be on the receiving
end."
Interesting. What's the difference between the lasers and the energy weapons
that Ryo-oh-ki uses though? In regards to their effectiveness anyway.
I thought that Ryo-oh-ki's energy weapons were from Tenchi Universe,
and she had to use the Light Hawk Wings to have any real offense in
the OAVs.
be worth it. And I got worse girl troubles than he does, anyway. "
Heh, not likely. Even at this point.
Of course. :)
It wouldn't affect him, but it might hurt Nuku, and that wouldn't do,
so the filters that allowed air to enter the main cabin were sealed,
reworked, refined, and reopened, all in the time it took him to
wheel about once more, orienting himself against the thirty two
remaining warheads.
Efficient little rat, isn't he? :)
Which is probably lucky, really.
them. And he didn't want to be kicked.
Heh
He's still got his priorities. :)
I always liked Yakumo, though I never quite understood why he wanted to
be human again. Well, aside from the whole "monster's constantly attacking
him no matter where he goes" thing. Speaking of which, any reason some
haven't shown up? Although that was really more because of Pai.
I figure that if any of them have shown up lately, that the reavers
probably found them quite tasty.
Ami moved to console him, shooting Setsuna dark look and tentatively
putting an arm about Yakumo's shoulders. "Then don't think about
her," she soothed him. "Think about something you love, instead."
Setsuna _a_ dark look
D'oh! Should be Haruka anyway, not Setsuna.
I'm not sure if the 'her," she soothed him.' is correct either. I think you
might have to either drop the 'him' or separate it into it's own sentence away
from the dialogue. I'm not sure about this though, just doesn't sound quite
right to me as it is.
Mmm.... You're right. I'll revise that.
And a tide of searing bright light exploded on the horizon, shining
easily through the buildings between the heart of the city and the
harbor.
Looks like Ranma didn't get to that last missile after all.
Dr. Hakubi.
OR:
How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Curse.
Though I suppose evacuation would work fairly well. Not sure what the range
on the radiation of a nuclear missile (they were nuclear weren't they?) is
though, which could be as bad in the long run.
I assume a few miles, though I'm not actually sure.
Nuku rested uneasily, unsure why the attempt with Ran-oh-ki had left
her so drained, but largely contented to sit with Ranma. She
twitched in her sleep fitfully, and Nuku carefully maintained her
position, arms wrapped around the slightly smaller girl and
restraining her easily. The little part of her mind that told her
how strong her grip was seemed to be damaged, as restraining Ranma,
who was only twitching very slightly, appeared to take a force that
would shred tensile steel.
I'm not sure if attempt is the right word in that first sentence, assuming
she's talking about her and Ran-oh-ohki destroying the missiles, since they
were mostly successful.
Point. Will revise.
"Commodore! We have reports of an attack from Ryouga's group!"
Weren't the radio's all giving off static? Or did that die down?
Ranma's been napping for a bit, so yeah, the static should have died
down.
Anyway, for what it's worth, hope that C&C helps. As with any, it's all in
my opinion, if not just random comments.
But oh-so-helpful! Thanks for C&Cing. :)