Subject: [FFML] Re: [ffml][fanfic][BGC Classic][repost]Saber's Destiny, chapter 1/5
From: Jeanne Hedge
Date: 1/15/2002, 7:55 PM
To: Andrew Wilson <templar@softcom.net>, ffml <ffml@anifics.com>


At 06:29 PM 1/14/02 -0800, Andrew Wilson wrote:

Bubblegum Crisis: Saber's Destiny
By Andrew Wilson


<snip>

"We need someone who can operate heavy weapons, as well as being a front
line fighter.  Look at her records.  She's had training in firearms, and
is a brown belt in Kempo." (1)

"But she worked for Genom!"


<snip>

Sylia winced when the device activated.  "I never like doing this." (2)

<snip>

Notes:

If people think that Ranma and Shampoo make a good couple, I figured I
could have Madigan join the KS's (contrary to what some believe, I don't
think she died at the end of "Red Eyes," there's no evidence either
way).  Besides, I like the accent (in the dub).

1: Yes, a brown belt, not black.  This ain't Ranma 1/2, not every Joe
Shmoe is a dan rating ("even in something as silly as martial arts
cheese toast making" Kenko, Girl Days).

2: She would have calibrated the thing to have minimal effect on her own
augmentations, but nothing's perfect.

You've picked my favorite of the various speculations on how Priss was to
die for your story. :)

A suggestion - please don't use footnotes in the body of your story. I
personally find them distracting and annoying, and I'm sure I'm not alone
in that.  Discuss things in your notes as you have - it's not that
difficult to add words to your discussion to remind people what you're
referring to instead of numbers :p




Jeanne Hedge
http://www.jhedge.com

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