Damn, Don.. you could get a job writing for porno
movies. Heh. A high PAYING job at that. ^_^

         Seriously, first time read through, very well done.
I'm a LITTLE uncertain that Ranma would be easy with the
taking of his girl-type's virginity, but it's your story,
not mine.

         All in all, I enjoyed it.

         Ed Becerra

         "Dreamers may die, but the Dream is eternal..."



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