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Give a hobbit a fish and he eats fish for a day.
Give a hobbit a ring and he eats fish for an age.
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Donald Lee Granberry" <noharness@mac.com>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Tuesday, January 08, 2002 10:30
Subject: [FFML] [fanfic][Ranma]Comes the Cold Dragon: Part XIIIA R4

       Fifteen minutes later, Nabiki forgot all about her to-
do list. She could not ever remember feeling so good, and the
diamonds were so beautiful. She fell asleep with the book
clutched to her breast.

Happier than usual pills?
 

       Ranma grinned and nodded his head. The three of them
sat down and began to slurp away at their noodles when Nabiki
let out the most extraordinary squeal any of them had ever
heard her utter. She was wriggling from head to foot without
waking up.

So I guess part B is her dream.

       Nabiki slowly opened the box. Her eyes grew to the
size of dinner plates once she saw what was inside the bento.
 
       "Yeeeek!" Nabiki squealed, then wriggled from head to
foot.

Oh, that I guess now we know what she was dreaming about. :}b

       "Hey, I {reveal : revel} in my dumb-jock image, okay?"

Though there is a certain beauty in the original wording.

       "Oh, man! I been wantin' to do that all day!" Onna-
Ranma said with a relieved gasp. Akane cuffed {him : her} gently on
the back of the head.

       "You got that right, Sis," Nabiki said, sounding
deadly serious. "This little trick of yours, Ranma, will
attract more hoodlums and sharks in grey flannel than you can
even imagine, Ranma. We have {gotta : got to} keep it secret."

She may be excited, but I don't think she'd drop her language level.

       "Besides, Nabigi," Akane chimed in, "he reveals in his
dumb-jock image, remember?"

Ok, so it was intentional earlier.

       "Some secrets I never revel, Doc."

That too.  You are a wicked, wicked man.





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