DB Sommer wrote:
Sorry it's taking me so long to get back to people. Got this little Diablo2
LoD addiction to deal with. :)
Mmmm. Mindless clickage! Must... resist...
DB Sommer wrote:
[Author's note: Just need one more person to get back to me with part B.
Should be out within the next 8 days. Until then, enjoy.]
Must... complete... backlog...
Mine's bigger than yours by now, I'd wager. Love to have a day off to catch
up, but I'd probably just try to get through the rest of act III first.:)
It's not the SIZE of your backlog...
... though incidentally, are you planning on C&Cing any more of PoE
any time soon?
hopefully be more than the ones this boy had remaining.
'the ones' sounds a little stilted.
Not sure what I'd replace it with at the moment, though.
'few' perhaps? or 'days'?
"Why are you making us wear these ridiculous outfits again?" Hasam said
miserably to his superior,
, -- . (betcha THAT one was caught already...)
No, actually.
Then I get to feel SPECIAL! :p
'The woman'. Hmm...
>From chapter 2. She's going to be plagueing the Avengers in a while and I
needed to refresh people's memories of her.
Smart.
That's more like it.
They're just easily distracted.
But fun characters to write nonetheless. :)
Ah, good old Ryu.
Oui.
Ryo, even. Bleah. I am Mr. Not-on-the-ball today. >_<
"Think we should try that? I mean dressing like butch women."
"Couldn't hurt."
...
I've known people this desperate. Never me, though. Really.
I've known someone who has as well. When I put on a dress for
halloween, everyone just asked me what my costume was... 9_9
"I'd be inclined to agree."
Heh!
Each has several skill points in 'Stating the Obvious'
Should have put it in Art of Distraction.
It's a mix. Outfit is completely Bob Frank Whizzer from the 40's. Villianous
nature and eventually name change from the villianous 60's Whizzer who was
part of the Squadron Sinister.
Ah, I see...
only time Ukyou had available to hunt down criminals for the rest of the
week.
Hehe...
When you're a teenager, sometimes you can only be a part time hero. :)
I seem to remember something like that from one of the Robins in the
Batman comics...
A rogue's gallery of rejects. Miller made Bullseye dangerous, at least.
Who?
"But son-"
son -- Son (?)
will go ahead and change unless told otherwise.
I'm not positive about that one...
echoing with every step taken.
I'm not sure if it holds true in the comic books, but I would think
that a hero (or even super-hero)is more than simply the sum of his
equipment.
Yep, but in Genma's case, the suit indicates he's taking responsibility for
his actions. Besides, if he doesn't keep his identity secret, Genny and
Nodoka will be open to attack.
Point.
Heh...
Had to give at least a passing nod to her cooking. Although I think using it
to create the 'cliche' for Tofu and Kasumi mixing was a nice touch.
Heh. Fair enough.
Wish I had more constructive advice to offer. But you don't make
enough mistakes! Or I'm missing them...
Oh, I make them. Perhaps you were having an off day. :)
Well, let's hope they all get caught regardless. :p
Anyway, interesting story, sorry for the lateness,
No, you never have to do that with me. My backlog is growing so big, even
I'm feeling intimidated. Haven't done a bit of writing since I sent this
chapter out, so don't expect it any time soon. Much to do, even after the
holidays.
I know how that works. >_<
Heh. Pretty soon when I say that, it won't be in that 'It's right after Jan
1st sense.
Ouch...
D.B. Sommer