Gary Kleppe wrote:
I used to be a prereader for this, but I don't remember getting these
chapters, so I'll C&C them on the FFML. If you have been sending me
stuff for preread, please make sure you're mailing to my (current)
address. The execpc.com address won't get mail to me at all, and stuff
sent to the mediaone.net one will be delayed.
And that explains that.
Disruptor <mathews1@gte.net> wrote:
"Why, Lord?" Hazid asked of a bust of Elvis. "I was so close to
spreading your worship."
"Shan-pu a cat, Mu Tsu a duck, Ryoga Hibiki a pig, Genma Saotome a
The characters shown for Mousse's name in the original series read as Mu
Si, not Mu Tsu.
panda, Pantyhose Taro a whatever, Rouge a Shiva. Hmmm. I should
prepare more storage items. But what use are animials such as a pig,
duck, cat, or panda? If I knew where those other two were...."
As long as he's being comprehensive, let's not forget Ha Bu ("Herb"),
another gender-change curse. There's also Lukkosai, a child, but that
may not have happened yet by the time of this story.
Herb is dead. He's been dead for a while. If you check one of the
earlier chapters, Hazid used the ring against a person with a gender
curse, but the dragon blood caused him to die.
The idea of a wizard who worships Elvis is weird enough that it has good
There is a cult that worships Elvis. Wierd, but true. At least it's
better than my previous idea of having the wizard suffer from Saturday
Night Fever and was bent on spreading disco throughout the world.
potential for comedy. I already suggested having him use Elvis songs as
incantations; look for other ways you can use this. The temple keeper
seemed rather annoyingly all-knowing, but I'll wait until I can read the
next part to see how that bit comes out.
Gary Kleppe
http://www.akane.org/gary/comics.html