The idea of a wizard who worships Elvis is weird enough that it has good
potential for comedy. I already suggested having him use Elvis songs as
incantations; look for other ways you can use this. The temple keeper
seemed rather annoyingly all-knowing, but I'll wait until I can read the
next part to see how that bit comes out.

First, I was enormously pleased to see more of this story come out. Second,
I have to vote with Mr. Kleppe  on this one. For instance:
 
"Buruu muun! Ah, Buruu muun! Buruu muun oubaah Kentaaki kiippon
shainingu!...
 
It just cracks me up! I can't help it, even though I was never an Elvis fan.
It is very funny idea and is indeed an excellent opportunity for the author
to inject more than a little comedy.
 
Don.

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