Ooohh... very nice work, Raye.  You've captured Megumi pretty much as I see
her.  Sorry I can't offer all that much more, but I can think of this one
thing... I don't know how well it would fit into the story, but I'd be
interested to see her thoughts on Ruriko... does she still regard her with
the same jealousy in the aftermath of the finale?

Hope to read more from you soon.  Keep writing!
________________________________________
Andrew Dynon

"If the story was beautiful, then the beauty belongs to us all; if it was
bad, the fault is mine alone, who told it."
- Zanzibar Swahili traditional story ending

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