Subject: [FFML] Re: [FFML][Ranma 1/2] Misty Chapter 1
From: Brian Randall
Date: 12/29/2001, 11:35 PM
To: Allen/Gammon Family
CC: ffml@anifics.com

Allen/Gammon Family wrote:

Hello,

I posted this a long time ago before my muse became bemused with
 my inactivity and left for other writers.  Lately, I've been
somewhat reinspired and have written some more in this story.
Here is the first chapter.  I'll send the second later.

Misty - Chapter 1

The characters contained within are the property of Rumiko
Takahashi. The only exception is the SI character. Ms.
Takahashi has sold he rights of her characters to many
companies. I will glumly cease and desist upon the request of
Ms. Takahashi or any of her agents.

    Righty-o.

"Yes, I did.  It's really a very simple operation.  You see,
they put the animal to sleep and,"  I started blushing at the
thought of the words. "take off the scrotum and testicles of
the animal.  According to Mr. Nokomura, it's relatively
painless and the animals are ever so much happier afterwards."

    words. "take -- words, "take (?)


As usual, any C&C, MST's, flames or thoughts are welcome.

    I'm afraid that's the only error I noticed, though in generall, I'd like to say that was a great story, so far, amusing in a subtle manner. I'd like to see more of it, and I though you did a great job on this chapter. :)

    Is this kept on a webpage anywehere?

-- 
I write fanfiction. Too much of it. You can read it here, thanks to
a kind grant from the Larry F foundation:
http://members.tripod.com/lwf58/fan_fiction/durandall/index.html
--
Haiku of my lament:

Forgive my spelling,
my U.S. education,
is the source of blame.

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