Nice chapter. Usagi's vocal chords...is this medically correct? I don't know at
all, but it looks like something you should get a doctor's opinion on. If you
already did then kudos for doing your homework.

Would a Moon Healing Escalation heal her? I don't know if she could use it on
herself...also, maybe becoming Sailor Moon would induce a magical healing effect
seen in so many fanfics. Of course, if she can't talk at all, it would be difficult
to Make Up...I expect Luna to be completely clueless as to what to do.

It seems to me that whispering, though, doesn't involve the use of the vocal chords
at all, so Usagi should be able to whisper just fine. But I'm not entirely sure on
this...some whisper sounds might involve the vocal chords to an extent. There
should be some way of whispering though where all the noise comes from the air from
the lungs hitting the surfaces in the mouth. The "sh" sound, for example, can be
plenty loud while whispered, but doesn't involve the vocal chords at all.

The reversals in this chapter were great. I loved the way the gang just gave the
money back and the victims were more traumatized by Carrot than by the gang.

Peter

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