I see one obvious problem with this as written.  There is no reason for
Ranma to be at Strange's confrontation with Dormammu.  His contribution 
is as extraneous as that of Akane.  Actually, I would have been amused 
if _Akane_ had dealt with Mordo's attempt to interfere by punching him 
out.  There'd be a certain irony in Akane dealing with Mordo using her 
fists.  Failing that, Ranma should step forward and offer to fight for 
Strange.  Otherwise you are just novelising some old Doctor Strange 
comic book fundamentally unchanged.


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