From: Brian Randall <brian@azurite.org>
To: "E.L. Toh" <dyfltinquisitor@hotmail.com>
CC: ffml@anifics.com
Date: Sat, 22 Dec 2001 20:49:49 -0800

Ch 05: Gahgiel Angel of Fish is destroyed in a jiffy so
that the crew can get on with their beach party, flashbacks
and other hijinks.

    Fan of Nadesico, at all?

erm. actually i didn't see starting watching Nadesico until
yesterday. mainly cos a few others had previously commented
on similarities. must ask my anime dealer for gunbuster now. ^_-

nb. Oh-oh.

    'uh-oh'?

fixed.

    Interesting...

See Iain M. Bank's 'Excession'

    Ack. Okay, not used to single quotes in quotation.'

    reconnoitre -- reconnoiter (unless it's a British spelling, or the like...)

i've been using british spelling, so i thought i'd use british
punctuation as well. but i didn't learn the rules for all this
stuff in school... mainly picked up some of it due to the
presentation of dissertation regs and all...

Gendo remained in his Position, silent and glasses glinting,
in full uber-character mood.

    Position is intentionall capitalized?

Who else has got a Position like that? Actually Gendo
should have it copyrighted or trademarked. ha.

'I want one of those too,' thought Gendo, but fortunately
Shinji failed to pick it up psychically due to Rei's much
closer and louder thought in a similar vein.

    Errr? Rei's a Newtype?

Yes, sort of. I've gotten a bit of flak over this alternative
Rei, and being a certified Reihead myself, i can understand.
though no one has ever complained about the newtype Maya. ^_^

'Rei has never done anything to harm you. Why?'
'Why not?'
'Why?'
'It seemed like a good idea at the time.'
'And now?'
'I don't know.'

    I like that part.

thanks. this was the part that had me the most worried.

    Interesting... Well, you got my attention. :p

thanks for reading. i've also taken most of your suggestions
about the fixes required for the text (D'oh! n times).

merry christmas!
Ee Loong

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