On Sun, 16 Dec 2001, Phil wrote:

C&C is most welcome.

*sharpens wi-- er, pencil*
 

Disclaimer: El-Hazard characters and situations is the
property of AIC / Pioneer LDC, Inc. I am merely using the
characters for the purpose of profit-free entertainment and
make no claim on them.

Vincent Seifert has kindly provided webspace for most of
my fanfics and links to the rest at the following
address:

http://www.csus.edu/indiv/s/seifertv/kagami/

I'll put this one there too, of course.

Contact me at: kagami@jeack.com.au

Vince's response to my comments got me thinking further on
this issue, so...

You're not the only one.  ^_-  Watch this space...

A World of Dreams
An El-Hazard Fanfic
By Kagami

She could see Makoto's expression: a soft smile in a face
free of concern. His eyes were closed, and he seemed
asleep. Next to him, clasped in a loving embrace, floated
Ifurita. Long strands of white hair veiled her face.

{It changes color with the lighting, but I think its base color -- in OAV
series I, anyway -- is pale blue... well, maybe the liquid is distorting
colors.}

Held
tightly between them was the device that had started the
entire situation - the Power Key Staff.

{The thing's a sort of divine cousin of the humble Swiss Army Knife, isn't
it?  Too bad it doesn't have the Moral Compass blade...}

"You know what Dr. Strellbaugh said, Londs." Rune shook

{Serious question: is that was his name was originally supposed to be,
before it was kana-ized and then romanized again?  One of the more
troublesome names in anime.}

Rune shuddered. All her scientists had failed to counter
the increasing numbers of Rapture nodules appearing in El-
Hazard.

{This is the only part of the story that gives me any trouble... so I'll
let you have it.  Every story gets one anomaly for free.  :) }

If El-Hazard was magnificence incarnate, then the world of
Rapture was perfection. All your dreams and desires became
real. And Gallus had truly loved her, within...

{Nice notion.}
 

In the end, it was her love for flawed Roshtaria that had
overcome her desire to stay forever.

{Another nice notion.}

Rune shook her head once more. Londs was right. Across the
River, the Bugrom were slowly recovering after their
virtual annihilation in the last war.

{Queen Diva must be really busy, ah, reproducing... :) }

She turned to Londs. "Unplug them."

{Oy... she better hope Ifurita doesn't survive, because if she does, she's
gonna be upset... especially if Makoto doesn't.}

The End?

Well, maybe not quite yet.  :)

This is just the sort of thing (more stories exploring the ideas people
were throwing out about El-Hazard) I hoped would happen... thanks for
writing and sharing!

Vince Seifert    Fanfic Analyst   FFIRC Frog
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Fanfic: http://www.csus.edu/indiv/s/seifertv/toth/
Ideas are worth their weight in gold.

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