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12:33 AM est

Sic pereant omnes inimici tui, Domine

Thus perish all your enemies O Lord

Thunstone and Pursuivent

Silver Swords against the Darkness 

Descent

A Ranma 1/2 Fan Fiction

By

Jeremy Harper	

An interesting opening almost guaranteed to make readers want more--it certainly did me.

Ranma seems to have been placed in a no-win situation.  And this Ranma, who failed Akane before, will likely lack some of the brash arrogance and over-confidance that was his hallmark.  What will he do next, I wonder?

I didn't notice any grammatical errors, and I tend to pick up on such things.

Please, continue.

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