----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Brian Randall" <brian@azurite.org>
To: <DarkAlphaR@aol.com>
Cc: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Friday, December 14, 2001 14:46
Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma][SM] Waylaying Before the Oak Tree

arkAlphaR@aol.com wrote:

Makoto opened her diary to reveal tens of dozens of pages 
filled with her writing. Flipping rapidly through her pages, she 
realized that only thoughts from last two years were recorded inside. 

'Tens of dozens' sounds strange, but that could just be me, in which 
case you can dismiss it. :p

Overcomplicated; since it's a round figure anyways, why not "hundreds"?


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