Ok, twisted, off the wall, and definitely strange. If you ever do any member of the cast falling into a spring of drowned Saya-jin(also spelled Sayan, aka DBZ, and don't ask me for the proper spelling, I'm not sure what it is) I will personally find out where you live and bury you alive for such deeds.

One small comment, having had several birds myself. A Macaw and a parrot are distinctly different, but I can see how they can be easily mistaken for the other to people who don't know the difference. Not that I havent made the mistake of thinking one was the other before, of course not.

Maybe having her correct them, "I'm not a parrot! I'm a macaw!" would have been a good, if short tidbit, knowing her tendency to get annoyed at times.

Ok, two comments. While Akane-Macaw didnt have the grip on the container due to her feet, she could have knocked it over and flown under it to get a nice dousing of water to enact a change back. I know you wanted her to stay in bird form ... just a minor nitpick.

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