Nice, tense piece of work. I'm not sure that I agree
with neither Ranma nor Akane visiting Gosenkugi
after he stood up to Kuno and actually defended their 
relationship like that, but they may have had any
number of reasons for not visiting, such as embarasment,
a limited visitors policy due to either his parents or the
hospital (given that Ranma and Akane were inadvertantly
involved with the fact that Kuno attacked him), Ranma
being on a restraining order (not to approach Kuno, but
with Hikaru in the same hospital...), or just plain insensitivity
(nobody's perfect, especially not those two...).

While I think the work stands as is, I would also like to
see either a continuation or a few alternates on this theme.
Perhaps with Gos being visited by the pair, or rescued by
them before he was too badly hurt, or someone else
deciding to grow up like Gos did, and try to move on with
their lives...

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