Dave Menard wrote

As always, D.B., when you're funny, you're _funny_.

Thanks. Was in the mood to do a mindless humor fic. Glad it was keeping in
the Mindless Tripe tradition.

This one had me giggling

like a maniac. Finally, a GW fic that those of us who can't stand GW can
enjoy!

I confess to not being a big fan of it, but I didn't dislike it. It just
seemed... silly, in some parts. So I poked fun of some of them in this. Next
up ought to be a tale of 'Harry Potter Meets Lady Une and her Magic
Glasses.' ^_^

    One thing, though. You kind of telegraphed the "Heero-beats-up-Dolph"
gag, I could see it coming a mile away. It was still funny, and I can't

for

the life of me think of how to improve the timing, but it was the one
slightly-weak bit in an otherwise stellar fic.

Thanks to you Larry F, and CWL, I think I've got it rearranged better by
having Heero's request for help right before he beats Dolph up.

    Keep up the good stuff!

Will try. Thanks for letting me know you liked it.

Dave Menard

(Oh, BTW, the actually IS new Le Plus Ca Change due, very soon. Ja!)

Wow. And only more than a whole year after  you projected the next chapter
would come out too. (See? I never forget. ^_^)

D.B. Sommer



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