As always, D.B., when you're funny, you're _funny_. This one had me giggling
like a maniac. Finally, a GW fic that those of us who can't stand GW can
enjoy!

    One thing, though. You kind of telegraphed the "Heero-beats-up-Dolph"
gag, I could see it coming a mile away. It was still funny, and I can't for
the life of me think of how to improve the timing, but it was the one
slightly-weak bit in an otherwise stellar fic.

    Keep up the good stuff!

Dave Menard

(Oh, BTW, the actually IS new Le Plus Ca Change due, very soon. Ja!)

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