I just realised this:
She stood a handful of feet behind her father. Heero pointed to
Jean-Claude.
"Did you do this to him?"
Finding some spine, Relena said defensively.<<
You confused mother and daughter. Tsk, tsk.
Also, I agree with lwf58 on how avoid telegraphing the gag.
Sometimes he makes me do it with one hand tied behind my back in case one
of my arms ends up
immobilized.
I guess she one of the few people who can actually say, "I can do that with
one arm tied behind me." and really mean it!
Finally, where's 2?
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