Subject: [FFML] Re: [MST] [KOR] Who do you love?
From: "Kevin Callahan" <kionon@hotmail.com>
Date: 11/13/2001, 12:01 AM
To: "Sean Connor" <sec@konatsu.dhs.org>
CC: <ffml@anifics.com>


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From: "Sean Connor" <sec@konatsu.dhs.org>
To: "Kevin Callahan" <kionon@hotmail.com>
Cc: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Monday, November 12, 2001 10:13 PM
Subject: [FFML] Re: [MST] [KOR] Who do you love?


On Mon, Nov 12, 2001 at 01:15:00AM +0000, Kevin Callahan wrote:

As I was walking home again I put my hands in my pockets and

<Kevin> the other one flicking a cigarette?
<Kathrine> Isn't that ironic, Madoka?

Well, no...  He just said that she wouldn't have healthy babies, and he,
after all, can't have babies...  :P

I think you missed the Alanis Morrisette thing here.


Hikaru-chan would

<Kathrine> cry, whine, bitch, and be generally annoying?
<Madoka> That'd be in character, so therefore we must assume not.

Tut tut...  Even your MST victim here manages to avoid stooping to
character
bashing.

I'll have you know I'm a Hikaru supporter. That doesn't mean Kathrine is :P


She is
always wearing clothes that don't show off her body, but she is
very well developed.

<Kevin> Ok, I'm sorry, but time for some serious commenting.
<ALL> Awwwwww....
<Kevin> This is blatantly not true. Madoka was wrong. You need to
see the series. This should be a basic prerequisite to any
fanfiction, but especially lemons. If you want to actually write,
then please, study the characters. PLEASE. This now concludes the
Fanfiction Public Service Announcement. We now return you to your
regularly scheduled MiST.

Actually, Kyousuke makes a quite similar comment in one of the manga
stories, so it's kind of hard to say that this is out of canon.

Perhaps, though I recall where Hikaru is considered cute, but not developed
as compared to Madoka.

Whether or not the author was taking inspiration from the manga or not,
though, is an open question...

I doubt that.


Finally she took my slip off.

<ALL> Bwahahahahaha...
<Kevin> He's wearing a slip?
<Madoka> I know Kyosuke is weird, but that's just...

Heh.  A Freudian slip, perhaps?  :)

Got me.

Then, suddenly, violently, the door opened. "Oh my god !" I thought,
"This must be Hikaru-chan's mother, what should I say, she'll
kill me ! She must think I'm a monster."

<Madoka> It came from the radioactive wasteland of post World War 2
Hiroshima... It's KYOZILLA!

"Kasuga-kun ?!" "A-Ayuk..."

In other words, this is the cue for the threesome to start?


I hope not.

Actually, aside from being a typical lemon, I think that the main problem
with this fic was that English isn't the author's first language.

Perhaps I'm in error for doing this MST then, as I was not aware he was
not a native English speaker.

Maybe I'm
just being idealistic, but I don't really think that you should expect the
same standards from an ESL author as from a native English author, and I
have indeed seen worse English from native speakers.  :(

I agree on both counts, and in retrospect perhaps this was premature.
Regardless, KOR isn't exactly unknown throughout the world, why didn't
he write in his native langauge?

Kevin Callahan
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