I agree; another great episode, John!

Nitpicks:
1) The good guys need to get a break.  The amount of sh*t 
they're going
through is starting to detract from my enjoyment of the work.

Not sure I agree, though I was and AM anxious to see the
next plot twists with Ranma, especially Tourmaline's next move.

2) Gos goes from falling-over-himself geek to
grand-master-of-the-witty-reparte a little too cleanly in 
this.  (Particuar scene in which I noticed this - him and
Makoto making out in the car.)

I interpreted that scene as Gos's former self coming to the
fore (the Silver Millenium Guardian Pluto), and enjoyed
it quite a bit.  We don't really know anything (yet) about
the old G-Pluto's romantic skills or lack thereof.

3) Well, I was going to complain about the cliche-ness of 
Ryouga and Ami, but I decided to let that slide, especially
with what you've done to Setsuna. ^_^;

That's for sure!  Just when it looked like Setsuna had the
inside track for Ranma, she gets THIS happening to her
(chortle, chortle).

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