On 4 Nov 01, at 21:24, Christopher Angel wrote:

Wow.  Real ficcage, not pointless character/canon debates.  What a novel
concept.

Well, it is, in theory, what this list is for... :)

Now that my snarkiness is over and done with...


WAI!  John-ficcage! WAIWAIWAIWAIWAIWAIWAIWAI *bonk* ite....

Thanks.  Ego food helps me write :)
 

As usual, John, another excellent Chapter to an excellent series.  I
particularly liked how this chapter was in many ways centered on Ranma and
Rei, without actually FEATURING them.

Thanks.  Originally, this and 13 would have been one episode, but 
then I realized that didn't really work very well, as it was turning 
ludicrously large and the plot lines didn't really intersect...they 
diverged.

 

Nitpicks:
1) The good guys need to get a break.  The amount of sh*t they're going
through is starting to detract from my enjoyment of the work.

I'll just say that difficult victories are the sweetest, but I don't intend 
to leave a trail of bodies at the end.  :)  Things will, in the end, get 
better.
 

2) Gos goes from falling-over-himself geek to
grand-master-of-the-witty-reparte a little too cleanly in this.  (Particuar
scene in which I noticed this - him and Makoto making out in the car.)

This is called 'Gosunkugi's past life takes him over for a while'. :)
 

3) Well, I was going to complain about the cliche-ness of Ryouga and Ami,
but I decided to let that slide, especially with what you've done to
Setsuna. ^_^;

I've never read a Ryouga/Ami fic, so for me, it's not a cliche :)



John Walter Biles :  MA-History, ABD, Ph.D Candidate at U. Kansas
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