Interesting usage of meter in this. It describes the situation rather well. Ironically, I'm impressed by it even though I'm convinced that though Mousse is wholly devoted to Shampoo, with the proper influences and situations, he could be turned to damm near any girl (or guy, as a lot of my writing shows) in the series.

But this is one of the first times I've seen something like this completely in canon. I'm impressed.

Mark G.

"I've got the straight edge!!!!!!!"

                     -Ian MacKaye of Minor Threat, 1981


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