At 00:30 10/24/2001, Tripolar Disorder wrote:

Epiphany Chapter 5

By Tripolar Disorder
and Dragon Dagger

       <snip>

A rather long chapter we admit, but there was much to cover, and
we ended it on a massive Cliffhanger.

I can hear the voice of the narrator for the Dubbed DBZ, saying
something.....

"What does this mischievous water sprite want with our hero?
Find out next time, on another Exciting episode of Drag, err
Ranma 1/2  Epiphany.

       *cough*cough*

       Don't you mean "..another exciting episode of Drag Queen 1/2"?
*evil smirk*

       Seriously, aside from a number of typos, this was a nice
chapter and entertaining to read.

       However, you do seem to be allowing some errors that a
spellchecker would NOT catch slip by. For example, you're using
the word "past", when what you MEAN (or at least it LOOKS like you
mean) the word "passed".

       Past = some previous time. Passed = to have moved on or
beyond something.

       Good usage, "My mother passed away, sometime in the past."

       Get the idea?

       Nice fic, hope to see more of it.

       Ed Becerra.

       "Dreamers may die, but the Dream is eternal..."

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