On Sun, 21 Oct 2001, Cute Kitsune Kaydee wrote:

At the Gates of Time Sailor Pluto was monitoring what was happening in the
time stream when suddenly and object materialized in the local vicinity. The
object was a blue box with a white light on top. The doors opened and out
stepped a man with dark curly hair and wearing a coat with a long silly
scarf.

The man looked at Setsuna and said , "Hey , uh it's you." and reached
forward to hug her.

Setsuna looked at the man said , "Hello there father."

You missed an opportunity.  Considering that his granddaughter is actually
named "Susan", which is rather close to "Setsuna", "grandfather" would be much
more appropriate here.

Strangely, I've seen this idea used in a parody once, but I don't ever
recall anyone doing it in a real story.

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