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Woa See Huan Suay
by Warr

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It means, "I Like Water" in Cantonese, which I
thought 
was too plain a title in English.  Will add a note
at
the end.

##Hmmm . . .unfortunately it was a little too obscure
in Cantonese. ^_^ Also, since the characters are
Japanese and most of the FFML audience is English
speaking with pretensions toward Japanese, this is
going to be lost on them. Well, lost on _me_, at any
rate. For all I know I'm the only one on FFML who
isn't fluent in Cantonese. 
(I've _just_ gotten to the point where I have most of
the Hiragana memorized and I've only looked at
Mandarin Chinese.(Syracuse Language software)
Cantonese is, unfortunately, somewhat further down the
list. 

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@@Cute. But "father" wouldn't know if she could

swim

or not? Or is this a comment on the absence of
Japanese fathers from the home? (Or this father in
particular?)
@@@@

This happened to me.  In Hawaii with my parents, at
the hotel pool on Maui.  Just changed the setting to

fit the story.  Only it was the lifeguard who saved
me, not my dad. 

##^_^ OK, I thought you were making a comment on the
remoteness of fathers in Japan (the Mother is the real
head of family) or perhaps commenting on Soun. 

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@@Nice little slice of life.
Very nice.
^_*

Thank you, Allyn.  I really appreciate the comments!
I'm such a lazy bum when it comes to writing,
comments
like this help a lot!

Warr

##Well, if you keep writing, you'll get over the 'lazy
bum' pretty soon. ^_*
Nice read. Keep writing. 

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