Hello Don...
Subject: [FFML] [fanfic][Ranma] Comes the Cold Dragon: Part VIa Rewrite
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"You are an incorrigible ham, Ranma Saotome!"
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Tofu and the construction crew snickered in unison.
...
Hata felt an odd parallel between the power plant and
the garden he had nurtured for the past thirty-years at his
huge country home. Each change of season brought changes to
both. Some of the changes were subtle. Others were as
difficult to ignore as the fiery red leaves of the maples in
his garden. Hata knew all of the changes well, in both his
garden and in his plant. Nothing, not even the subtlest
change, escaped his notice. When the stem of FCV-AGT100 (flow
control valve AGT100) began to spin, thus feeding much more
fuel to the number one gas-fired turbine of "A" train, Hata
heard it. He heard it despite the high level of background
noise because he knew every noise the plant made. Curious, he
walked the twenty meters or so needed to reach FCV-AGT101,
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FCV-AGT100?
which fed fuel to the second of the "A" train's gas-fired
turbines. It too was now wide open. He was not surprised when
the smaller relief valves on the two waste heat recovery
boilers lifted briefly, noisily releasing steam. This was
followed by the same relief valves on the "B" train waste
heat recovery boilers lifting briefly.
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Ukyou gasped. "You mean when he fought Safuron?"
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Akane nodded, then said, "Come on! We gotta try and
talk to him."
...
"Shut yer trap, will ya?" the sergeant in charge
snapped. "Ya might make one of my men lose his concentration
and that'd be all she wrote!"
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Hmmm... somehow this makes no sense, care to explain?
Mfg. Joerg
McHunter@GMX.NET
JJJaeger@neXgo.de
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