----- Original Message -----

 From: "Linda Shen" <echonymph@msn.com>
 To: <ffml@anifics.com>
 Sent: Friday, October 12, 2001 9:00 PM
 Subject: [FFML] [Ranma] Glimpses


 > Hey all,
 >
 > I've been dormant too long, the fingers are starting to itch to post
 > something as opposed to internalizing and editing.  This is *OLD*,
actually,
 > this is the FIRST piece of Ranma 1/2 fiction I *ever* wrote, and I
suppose
 > there're some obvious clues that it was my first ever attempt (not the
 > pairing and the pathetic writing style, not to say that it has improved
 > much...), but here we go:

    <SNIPPED>

     Sweet, kinda fluffy, but pretty darn good for your first attempt; I can
 see the beginnings of your style in there. Sometimes, a first fic can be
something special, 'cause the writer isn't bogged down yet with others'
preconceived notions of canon or characterization. (They just have their
own) Not bad for a freshman effort, and you shouldn't put yourself down; you
have a _great_ writing style. "Fragments" is one of my favorite pieces.

     BTW, _where_ are you archiving your stories, lately? The URL I have for
 "Fragments" is on crosswinds and just gives me a 404 error anymore...

 Dave Menard


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