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----- Original Message -----
From: "Robert Haynie Jr." <kenjiko2@knology.net>
To: "ffml" <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Thursday, October 04, 2001 18:45
Subject: [FFML] [Ranma] Girl Days Part 18, teaser

After a period of partial writers block on this series, repreating bouts

of

illness, and just plain stuff, here's a small taste ot the stupidity to
come.

I just hope things are going better for you now.  I'm glad to see you back
to writing.

Either enjoy or run in terrified fear and loathing.  Your choice...

How about both?

 Last night she'd slept next to Ranma on a spare futon in an
outfit that she'd quite frankly never envisioned herself wearing.
She'd always assumed that turning {inro : into} a girl instead of a pig

would

be a great improvement.  She was rethinking that position.

Just trust Ranma, he ... ah, she ... is a professional.  She's had training.
:})

 Now she was lying on her back in a powder blue negligee and
matching panties and listening to the sounds of chaos as Ranma and
her father began {thier : their} morning ritual of trying to beat the snot

out

of each other.  And wondering how she'd gotten into a scrape like
this.  This was the sort of thing that happened to Ranma, not her.

 Ranma {re-entered : returned}, having managed to send her father into a

state

of pandaness, and shook the water from her hair.  "Old man managed to
get a good one in today.  Say, the furo is ok right now, and we made
sure the Soap isn't there-- just the ordinary stuff.  You want a
bath, while I get you some clothes?"

 "If it wasn't for the fact that this is all Mousses' fault, it
would be yours," the blue-haired girl {scarled : snarled}.

 (There is no {hope : help} for it.  Like it or not, I shall have to ask
the aid of that peasant Akane Tendo and the red headed strumpet who
shares my Ranma-sama's name.)

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