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Give a hobbit a fish and he eats fish for a day.
Give a hobbit a ring and he eats fish for an age.
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Donald Lee Granberry" <noharness@mac.com>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Monday, October 01, 2001 14:28
Subject: [FFML] [fanfic][Ranma]Comes the Cold Dragon: Part IIIb Rewrite 1

        For all her riches, Kodachi Kuno was desperately
impoverished in the ways which truly mattered. This form of
poverty came part and parcel with her heritage. She was the
third generation of Kuno's born to great wealth who had not
had a part in doing the work necessary to create that wealth.
Her great-grandparents had made the mistake of sheltering
their children from all the sharks they knew and did not
know, in a vain effort to protect the family's wealth. This
is understandable, but is a stratagem easily overdone. Most
wealthy families find a balance in this regard. Kodachi's
family {did : had} not.

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