Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C]Comes the Cold Dragon: Part II Rewrite 1
From: Bira
Date: 9/30/2001, 11:10 PM
To: FFML


On Sun, 30 Sep 2001 18:56:58 -0700
Brian Randall <brian@azurite.org> wrote:


    And I have to disagree completely.

    I found that whole scene to be one of the most spectacularly written 
things I've ever read.

    But some people have issues with stylism...

        I don't really hate this type of description, I just think it this one in particular was a tad overdone. I might actually have enjoyed it if it was shorter and didn't go off into so many tangents. This narrative style can be very amusing if applied in the right dosage (like in some Discworld novels, which I'm a big fan of).

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