-Hmmmm . . .
well written as far as it goes.
I suppose the biggest problem is that Kasumi and
"Kimiko" are taking the whole thing much too calmly.
Coming back from the dead AND in your youngest
sister/daughter's fiance's body? IF you'd just brought
her back to life I could _almost_ see the atmosphere
you've created, but the combination, IMO, calls for
more shock and angst. Just my opinion.
I love the little bit with "insomnia" at the end. ^_^

In any event, a cute little story. ^_O

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