[FFML] Prereaders wanted

Hello,
After stopping all writing for almost 6 months due to personal reasons, I am finally starting to write Ranma based stories again. I would like to ask for volunteers to pre-read/proof read my stories. This will not be just for grammar or spelling errors, I am looking for people that will also point out bad dialog, way too OOC actions (without a reason for it given) make plot suggestions and critique the hell out of them.
The first thing I'm doing is to finish my multi-part story "Poisoned Honor". It is an angst/dark story (but not too dark) that dwells more on the feelings and emotions of the characters than the action. the already completed chapters are archived on the FanFiction.net as well as (earlier versions of story) the RAAC and FFML mini archives.

The BEST place to read it is on my webpage www.nukimouse.homestead.com It is under the link/hot button called MY FAN FICTION. Warning it does involve attempted rape and the result of that action, but it is NOT a lemon. Some sexual content was needed to tell story but it is kept at a minimum and I use euphemisms and the barest of details to tell these parts. I will be looking for people to pre/proof read chapters Six (it is already on my webpage) and chapter Seven, which will be ready for review in a couple of days.

Future writing: I hope to complete "Poisoned Honor" through chapter ten, plus start on a sequel to "Is Ranma-chan Hurt?" (I find comedy writing a lot harder than Angst or Action writing). I'm also working on a plot idea for a Ranma/Slayers X-over and a Ranma/pokemon or CCS x-over ( a request from my favorite niece)

If after reading all this you are still interested in pre-reading my stories, either reply directly to me (not FFML)
or E-mail me at Nuki_mouse@hotmail.com

Nuki Mouse