----- Original Message -----
From: "Jonathan Rosebaugh" <skip@plover.net>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Thursday, September 20, 2001 7:46 PM
Subject: [FFML] Experiment

A week ago, I posted a fic called Ghosts. When I was originally
writing it, I wrote mostly in the present tense. Just before

posting,

however, I changed that to past tense. In an effort to understand

how

to write better, I'm posting the original present-tense version. If
you've got a few minutes, please compare this to the one I posted
first, and let me know what you think. If you can't find the first
post in your FFML mailbox archive, it's at

http://miniarchive.dyndns.org:8080/cgi-bin/MiniArchive.exe?Page=Retrie
ve+Story&StoryID=155911

Ghosts

A Ranma 1/2 Story

Are you going to write a sequel to this where Ranma hears what Ryoga
tells him and decides to stop the terrorist? If Ryoga was transported
back to when the mirror was whole it must be then sometime before they
went into the past and met with young Cologne? And what happens when
ghost-Ryoga meets Ryoga?



Cute Kitsune Kaydee Immortal Researcher of Universes and also a Ki
Dragon half-Goddess half-Demoness who is a Nendo-kata and can
shapeshift between the dragon , Goddess , and Succubus forms. Known as
Goddess of Chaos + Mischief + Love and recently of Martial Arts +
Other Dimensional Travel + Alternate - Crossover Fanfiction +
Crossover Matchups + Perversion + Bi-sexuality.

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, CORAA , COAAR , COUAH , NKCOAAM , NKCOURAM.

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High Priestess of the Church Of Hikaru.

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