Very nice. I've read the whole series to date, and
have thus far enjoyed it.

One quible though: You keep describing Kasumi as
being 'less than a centimeter' in height, yet most of
the actual comparisons with other objects around her
suggest that she is at least five times larger, or around
an inch high to six inches high.

Granted, this could be due to some subconscious size
changing, as the source character, Janet Van Dyne,
*could* adjust her height like that and could even 
reduce herself to just under a centimeter or grow to 
nearly her original size while retaining her wings (oddly
they still disappear no matter what if she's at full size)

If its any help at all, Unstable Molecules and Unstable
Molecular Fabric were both independantly discovered
and utilized by two different people in Marvel Comics:

Reed Richards (Mr. Fantastic)
Flatman (of the Great Lakes Avengers)

Flatman won't give out his formula, as he believes that
the process that enabled him to discover them is
what gave him his power, and he's actually a bit more
socially responsible than Reed Richards and doesn't
go around handing out costumes made from a material
whose effects on health hasn't been fully tested.

If Kasumi can get a hang on her size changing ability,
Japanese toy stores are a ready supply of doll clothes of
nearly any size imaginable. Or she can raid the scrap bins
of dress shops and tailors for finer material that has been
discarded due to being otherwise too small to be of use...

I don't know what to say about Dr. Tofu - there's no getting
around the fact that he's going to be spending a lot on clothes
if he wants to be a super hero.

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