Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma] Burst of Confidence chapter one -- re-write
From: Jonathan Rosebaugh
Date: 9/17/2001, 10:26 PM
To: Brian Randall
CC: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>

On Mon, Sep 17, 2001 at 07:04:24PM -0700, Brian Randall wrote:
    It was hardly the reason that she and Shampoo had some to China, and 

Come to Japan, no?

stone worth the price of failure? The sight of Shampoo bouncing between 
the tables distracted Cologne, and she sighed again.

PLEASE tell me this isn't a lemon fic.

himself. Shampoo, this boy is going to fail... I'm afraid I'm going to 
have to nullify the Kiss of Life you're given him."

I thought it was called the Kiss of Marriage, though your version does
sound nicely symmetrical.

    Which meant that Ranma was in a quandary, since he was honor-bound 
to marry all three, but quite obviously, couldn't. Even if honor weren't 
involved, Ranma _cared_ about the three of them, and that was _more_ 
important than just honor. But how could he make them all happy? He 
couldn't. So he just waited, trying to maintain the status quo without 
ever shifting the balance one way or another, hoping, somehow, things 
would resolve themselves.

And what about Kodachi? True, she's not a real fiancee, but she's
still in there somewhere.

    ----
    Author's notes:

    And why not? If you think about it, it's almost feasible. Obviously 
not to the extents that I've taken it, but you have to wonder...

Well, not what I would have done, but that's no criteria for
judging. I think you can do well with this. Looking forward to more.

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