From: "ffml_use" <ffml_use@hotmail.com>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Subject: [FFML] [fanfic]New Ranma/SM crossover Idea (it's just something that been going around in my twisted mind)
Date: Sat, 15 Sep 2001 18:56:30 -0700


I think this fic should be call "The Brat, the Bastered and the Brain."
for this tile is appropriately named.  Be fore worned this idea lays
heavily in the alternate catagory for Ranma.

Not that there is anything wrong with that.

The story starts off with Ranma being born as the second child of
Neo-Queen Serenity.  Now for some unknown reason Usagi is
uncharacteriscally cruel in her treatment of her second child.

Okay, stop right there.

Now, if you are going to be trying to change Usagi/NQS like that, you better have a very good explanation why she is changing her usual pattern of behavior so much.

If you don't, then this fic will likely have no readers beyond the pro-evil Senshi,' and 'I hate Crystal Tokyo' crowd.

As you yourself said, Usagi is being different to her son.  Answer the question why, and find a way to make it believable, and you have a story.  If not, people won't read, or enjoy, it as much as otherwise.

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