The only gripe I have with this fic is the part below. Shouldn't Priss be
expecting this? After all, she 'knows' its a boomer because getting a
hardsuit built that small is 'impossible.' If she actually saw Nene's head
in there, THAT would have been a reason to faint because she 'knows' Nene is
dead!
Priss watched as the intruder raised the helmet off, but instead of the
expected face there was nothing. Priss's brain reached overload as the
helmet now held at waist level spoke to her
"Priss? Priss? ... Yo you in there?"
Nene watched as Priss froze walking forward and shifting her grip on her
head to one hand she waved her hand in front of Priss's now glazed over
eyes. Then suddenly Priss's eyes rolled back and she began to collapse.
Nene
reacted as she would as if she were in a normal body. She dropped what she
was holding and caught Priss and steadied her. The difference was she
watched her body catch Priss and as her body supported Priss she saw he
viewpoint descend to the floor then bounce once, then roll towards Priss's
feet.
"Whoah, That was weird."
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