Excellent. Loved it. Wonderful stuff. Damn, wish I could write like 
that  ^_^

Okay, enough of the pleasantries. Only problem I had with this one was 
that it seemed to mix continuities a bit. We've got the Juraian 
emperor, who seems to like Tenchi a whole heckuva lot better than he 
did last time we officially saw him - but we've also got Kiyonne and 
mentions of Kain, both of whom aren't in the same continuity as Asuza, 
as the emperor in that particular timeline is dead.

Other than that minor (or not so minor, depending on how you view such 
things), an excellent fanfic.


Derek
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