Subject: [FFML] Re: [FanFic][SM] Nuke 'Em 'Till They Glow!! Ch.10 P.2 (7/??)
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 9/9/2001, 10:49 AM
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And now for something that has nothing to do with 'It's Not So Bad Anymore"
:)



    Getting ready for a trip to the mall with friends to look
for clothes can be an involved process, or

not sure if you need that comma.

 a simple one, depending
on who you're going with. Considering that Jadeite was going with
Raye and Serena, it was going to be a painful one.

Have to agree with the man there.


    Raye grabbed Jadeite, stripped her down, and dumped her in the
bath for a few minutes. She then went through her wardrobe, trying
to find something that would fit the smaller girl, and finally
stumbled upon it: a frilly pink party-dress with lots of red ribbons
and white lace from when she was twelve.

So Raye really doesn't like Jade, I take it?

    "I know it's a little fancy just to go out to the mall," Raye
said, thinking it over, "but it's the only thing I have that'll
fit you. Everything else is just too big for someone like you.

Is Jadeite really that much smaller?


    The girl almost felt like it wasn't HER who stood up, smiled,
curtsied, and twirled around to give the other two girls a good look
at how she wore the dress. "Tee-hee!"

Probably because it isn't her. :)

    They shopped for clothes all over the place at a phenomenal
rate, and Jadeite could barely keep up. There was some sort of
unstoppable POWER that radiated from Raye and Serena; something
that the ex-general didn't comprehend, and perhaps never would.

No. Not in this lifetime. He needs to be born a woman proper to hope to have
any grasp of it.


    Maybe if she hadn't just gotten attacked by someone trying to
possess her body, she might have been able to handle it. She could
have had the mental strength to just take it as it went; to grin and
bear it. Might have. Could have. Would have had. Oh well, there's no
point in complaining about the past; It

it

    Fortunately, the purchase of a simple, cute near-ankle-length
white dress with green trim allowed the ex-general to finally change
out of the pink party ensemble. The pressure on her diaphragm dropped
slightly and she could breathe a little more easily.

Heh.

    Serena hovered over and examined Raye's handiwork. "I liked
her better without a ponytail." She pulled the bow off. "She doesn't
need it."

    "I think she DOES." Raye tied it back on.

    "No she doesn't!" Off.

No, she doesn't!


    Jadeite nodded slowly.

    Raye shrugged. "Okay. If you _really_ want them..." She
shelled out the cash to buy them, and then they went out for
icecream.

ice cream.


    Jadeite thought this over while taking another lick of her
vanilla icecream

ice cream

cone.

    "So, how's the vanilla?" asked Raye.

"Bland, like your personality," Jade quipped back.



    Melvin ran by the icecream

ice cream


    Now to find them.

    *Beep-beep* Jadeite heard a small alarm go off inside her
head, and then a voice came.

    <Heh. Time to put you out of your misery.>

Was waiting for that.


    The girl found herself giggling despite all efforts to suppress
it. She could feel another energy build up within her. No, it wasn't
just building up--It was like a dam ready to burst; a lit powder keg!
How could so much power be inside her without her knowing about it?!
It was beyond anything she'd ever seen!!!

'felt' would probably be better since I don't think she's really 'seeing'
the energy.


    A Pink Power coursed through the blonde's veins, wiping through
her mind like a great electromagnet scraping

electromagnet, scraping

its way across a treasured
and irreplaceable hard disk.

And there are no backups

    <DO YOU REALIZE WHAT YOU'VE DONE?!>
    <Sit back and Vhatch, 'Miss Jade.' I belieFF juu vHill findT
vhhat ghhhhappens next most amusinCK.>

And I'm sure we will too.



    The woman's eyes had a hint of a glow to them when she opened
her mouth and began to speak. "Happy birthday to you," she whispered
in a full, rich, overpoweringly sensuous voice.


This could get messy.


    The large door creaked open, where a few World War II soldiers,
German and British were facing off in a head to head

head-to-head

showdown, with
real bullets in their guns, hiding behind overturned tables,

Interesting hotel they have here.



    The captain hobbled over on his pegleg and lifted up the
girl's head with the side of his hook-hand. "What be ye doing
here, wenchling?"

    "Oh, thtop it, Mythter Myan!" the six-year-old replied
with a lisp,

Of course. Every cute young girl must have a lisp.


    The pirates were impressed; it was such a classic and catchy
tune. It would be a shame to ruin it. It also helped that they were
all closet Shirley Temple fans.

One might even say, convienent. :)


    "Aye," said the captain, "we'll be changin' the ship's name,
then."

    "Cut! That was perfect!" called the director. "Just the scene
I need to finish this movie!!!"

As long as no one complains about copyright infringement. :)


    "GRRR," Jadeite collapsed on the floor, grimacing as another
full-blown power-struggle wracked her body. A blue shock whipped
through her, and she began to grow a little. Her height went up a
little, and her dress slipped around to better fit its now-larger
occupant.

    She stood, a malevolent gleam in her eye.



Extra line break there.



    <I'll give you ten minutes to run or block what I'm doing. See
if you can. Then I'm firing pulse number two. Just so you know, at
the end of pulse number three, I think you'll be pretty well gone,
hmmm.>
    <You expect me to give up?!>
    <No, 'Miss Jade.' I expect you to DIE. Mwa-hahahah.>

Tsk, Tsk. The voice might pay for its taunting.


    The voice faded into obscurity and General Jadeite's face
smacked into the floor, once more finding herself in control. She
looked down at herself, then scanned her surroundings, eyes wide in
fright. She snatched a teddybear

teddy bear

Nice work and moves things along better than Ami's acid trip went. Waiting
to see what becomes of Jade.

D.B. Sommer


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