Aponar Kestrel wrote:

<frowns> There's got to be a better way to write that last bit that doesn't sound
so awkward. Then again, the whole thing sounds that way. Or is it just me?

It's just you.  Not too shabby...though not quite an opposite.  Perhaps
that was what you were picking up on: Rei as a spirit instead of just
spiritual does not quite seem to be the same as, say, Makoto or Ami or
Usagi robbed of their defining trait.
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