Subject: [FFML] Re: [teaser][R1/2/Avengers] Avenging Chapter 7
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 8/28/2001, 11:34 PM
To: "William Morse" <montanto@hotmail.com>
CC: <ffml@anifics.com>

Now that I've finished a scene, I've got a chance to answer these:

William Morse wrote:


Since people have been prodding me lately, I shall once again prove this
isn't dead yet.

Well be fair, you can't blame us for worrying.

True. Been almost a year since I posted the last chapter of this. And I sort
of discontinued it before that for a while as well. I'm glad people still
remember it.


Avenging
Chapter 7
Honey, I Shrunk Kasumi

Ah, so does this mean the theories regarding Kasumi as the Wasp were
correct?

You'll know by the end of the chapter.



...And promptly screamed in pain as the case landed squarely on her foot,
the weight of the attach� being far too much for her to carry around.

Ah, excellent. A problem that the boys in Marvel never bothered to bring
up
regarding Mr. Stark.

Well, in all defense he was a bit older and stronger than Kodachi is here.



"What?!"

"I ASKED YOU WHAT YOUR POWERS ARE!"

Cute Gag

Thanks. Seemed like it was a problem they never really addressed when one
had to deal with the dreaded man with long legs. :P


"Isn't it obvious?! As you can plainly tell, I am a brilliant inventor
whose
unappreciated work in hydraulics, as well as dealing with stupid
pointy-haired bosses and working fifty five hours a week for inferior
pay,
has frustrated me to the point that I have decided to embark on a life of
crime!

The Stiltman is Dilbert!?

Is there really that much of a difference? Both he and Wilbur Day were
pretty much weenies. :)



I
want, but what do I get? Weenie race car drivers. Men in frog costumes
with
springs in their feet that have the ability to *gasp* jump. Overweight
guys
that have bad hair and can glide. An owl is not an intimidating creature
to
anything but a mouse, godamnit!"

He should enjoy it while he can. I'm sure it's only a matter of time
before
you bring in Bullseye, Shampo ah. . .  er . . . . . Elektra (heh heh) and
the Kinpin.

Again, only time will tell.


"How dare you make fun of me and my cool super stilts!" Stilt Man
shouted.
"All right, I'll concede my appearance might not be intimidating, but my
abilities can't be beat. You see, by being up here, you can't get me. I'm
out of reach. And even if you could get fifteen feet high, I could go up
to
thirty, even seventy feet or higher. You can't touch me. Hahahaha!"

For some reason I'm reminded of what I'm fairly certain is the last
appearance of the Stiltman where he had just  gotten his armour out of
cold
storage only to discover they were filled to the brim with cockroaches. A
fact DD exploited.

I think you're right. Stilty hasn't really been used that much of late, and
for obvious reasons. Though there was a high point in his career when he did
take on and gave Thor a run for the money in a suit of adamantium
alloy/steel. And then there was the infamous 'Z-Ray' he made when he took on
Black Goliath...

Okay, so he has one high point in his career. Sue me. :)


"Just like I knew you would," Daredevil sighed as he waited until the
last
moment to nimbly leap to the side. As he jumped, he pulled the crowbar
upward and yanked off the manhole cover he had been standing on like a
pop
top to a bottle of beer.

I don't think the dialougue is necessary here and how about some
ammusement
instead of exasperation. After all the idiot fell for his trick
completely.

Will consider removing it. I think you're right, but I think he needs to say
something there too.



"Thought so." Daredevil tossed the UFO Catcher claw aside. And here
Cologne

Oops. I just caught a continuity error on my part here. DD's supposed to be
unaware Stick is actually Cologne. Have to reword that.


and the other half
was won on delivering a good performance.

cute

Looks good so far. Can't wait to see the rest of it.

Only gotten the next scene done so far do to being busy. And I'll let you
know it looks like thi chapter might be a bit long, so it could take me a
while. Just wanted to warn you in advance.

Thanks for the comments. They're appreciated.

D.B. Sommer


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